Monday, March 10, 2014

The Wise Bench

The wooden base looms over the dented legs.
Nails clutch on wile rusting and lay telling there telling there wise story's.
The legs old and paint scraped stand there old and rugged.
The surface painted used for years finally resting with another till lunch.
by Shaydon

2 comments:

Tristan said...

Fantastic describing words. My favourite part is
"The wooden base looms over the dented legs.
Nails clutch on wile rusting and lay telling there telling there wise story's." Because I can picture the bench in my head. Brilliant poem Shaydon!!

wee J said...

Hi Shaydon

Some powerful vocabulary you have used in here, well done. I particularly liked the image of the bence 'telling wise stories' and 'resting till lunch'.

Remember to proofread your work carefully.

Whaea Jane