tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2371606962689315741.post2967425966182967303..comments2024-01-24T23:38:37.573+13:00Comments on Mahana Kōtuku Blog: The Wise Bench Justin Nealhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17888929744653052884noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2371606962689315741.post-48856357165974107762014-03-14T07:04:04.032+13:002014-03-14T07:04:04.032+13:00Hi Shaydon
Some powerful vocabulary you have used...Hi Shaydon<br /><br />Some powerful vocabulary you have used in here, well done. I particularly liked the image of the bence 'telling wise stories' and 'resting till lunch'.<br /><br />Remember to proofread your work carefully.<br /><br />Whaea Janewee Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912746198652698082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2371606962689315741.post-20927836538269632012014-03-11T18:29:28.421+13:002014-03-11T18:29:28.421+13:00Fantastic describing words. My favourite part is ...Fantastic describing words. My favourite part is <br />"The wooden base looms over the dented legs.<br />Nails clutch on wile rusting and lay telling there telling there wise story's." Because I can picture the bench in my head. Brilliant poem Shaydon!!Tristannoreply@blogger.com