Kia ora. We are a bunch of Year 6, 7 and 8 kids at Mahana School, and we're looking forward to sharing our work on this blog.
Please leave us some comments!
Hi ChrisI enjoyed the 'shape' of your poem. Wow words like 'scrape' and 'cling' add a lot of interest. I LOVE the wobbly staircase image. LOVE IT!Consider your fourth line, "Whilst..." Read the poem again and see if it really adds to it, or if it could be tweaked a little. Let me know what you decide.
you wrote leaves twice maybe you could think of another word for leavesbut LOVE IT!!
Hi Chris,I like how you wrote the poem. How you coloured it to look like an oak-Pip
Thats an awesome poem Christopher. I liked the way you shaped the poem . The words and the Shape helped me to imagine an oak tree. MUM
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