Kia ora. We are a bunch of Year 6, 7 and 8 kids at Mahana School, and we're looking forward to sharing our work on this blog.
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The soccer ball stands lonely in the goal, The wind ripples the football net as the wind flows casually past, Over grown grass gives way to a gigantic thistle, Dandelions stand up proudly, their petals splayed beautifully. By Meg
8 comments:
Hi Meg.
Next time check out your spelling.
how big is the thistle?
Are you talking about the thistle outside?
GOOD JOB MEG-I love how it's about soccer, a unique self-theme!! 'Ella
It is about the one outside! Thanks Ella!
/Meg
i like yours
reilly
Love the soccer theme! From Natalie.
Great descriptive language Meg-maybe somebody should mow the lawn. Lisa
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