Kia ora. We are a bunch of Year 6, 7 and 8 kids at Mahana School, and we're looking forward to sharing our work on this blog.
Please leave us some comments!
The stream cascades down the rocks
The sunlight plummets from the sky leaving a golden rash across the water
Rocks smeared in alge dance underneath your feet
The water shimmers, winking at you.
2 comments:
neat will you be an auther
Hey Meila
Woohoo! Clear picture created in my mind by your poem Meila. Love the 'winking at you'. That's mint.
Check your spelling of alge.
Check to see if you could delete a 'the' at the start of one of your lines. I actually went "WOOHOO" when I read this. You've got it!
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