Thursday, March 6, 2014

The River

The stream cascades down the rocks
The sunlight plummets from the sky leaving a golden rash across the water
Rocks smeared in alge dance underneath your feet
The water shimmers, winking at you.

By Meila

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

neat will you be an auther

Anonymous said...

Hey Meila

Woohoo! Clear picture created in my mind by your poem Meila. Love the 'winking at you'. That's mint.

Check your spelling of alge.

Check to see if you could delete a 'the' at the start of one of your lines. I actually went "WOOHOO" when I read this. You've got it!