Kia ora. We are a bunch of Year 6, 7 and 8 kids at Mahana School, and we're looking forward to sharing our work on this blog.
Please leave us some comments!
Some good imagery here. What if you deleted some of the 'The's at the start of each line? Would that add to the poem?Remember to LABEL your post so we know who you are.
I love it MILLIE!!- Pip
I love it Millie /Meg
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