Monday, March 10, 2014

The River

The gorse carpets the rocks with a thick cover of prickly green.

Algae climbing ever so slowly up the rocks.

Water swishes past smooth as silk.

Kids stand by and anticipate a brilliant jump.

I jump of the prickly rock to finish my journey with a splash!


Mahana Kotuku said...

You helped me remember the day - Emily

Pip said...
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Jonathan said...

That's a cool poem!
Good description(WOW) words.
Have you checked the meaning for elegy?

Anonymous said...

Thanks Emily.

Mahana Kotuku said...

Hi Jonathan.
Yes i did and i figured it out.

Anonymous said...

Nice Poem Pip-You've really activated your nouns well!!