Kia ora. We are a bunch of Year 6, 7 and 8 kids at Mahana School, and we're looking forward to sharing our work on this blog.
Please leave us some comments!
Sun ricochets down to the ground and brightens up our beautiful world.
5 comments:
Anonymous
said...
Hey Pip
What sort of image do the words 'prick' and 'smother' evoke to you? Are you trying to convey an image of 'loveliness' or something more harsh? Consider your choice of words carefully to ensure you are giving a clear image to your reader.
Ricochet creates a particularly vivid image! Ka pai.
5 comments:
Hey Pip
What sort of image do the words 'prick' and 'smother' evoke to you? Are you trying to convey an image of 'loveliness' or something more harsh? Consider your choice of words carefully to ensure you are giving a clear image to your reader.
Ricochet creates a particularly vivid image! Ka pai.
Thanks!
I wil try and do that.
Pip
hiiiiii pippie love it i like the clouds prickleing the sky part
LOVE IT!!!!!!
hi pip Ka pai
pip your a great person
and
I LOVE IT
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