The trout leap out of the water like wales
the sun shimmers over the river
the rocks crumble over the hills
the rapids rush over the rocks like a ragging bull .
5 comments:
I can just imagine the trout
REMEMBER CAPITAL LETTERS AT THE START OF SENTENCES etc, the needs a capital T
'Ella
Man your work is all wonky, try to not use the SPACE BAR to much! ( :
Meg
I do like the imagery, and I agree about putting capital letters in. Good effort Nettie
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