Monday, March 10, 2014

The trout leap out of the water like wales                                                                                                                            
the sun shimmers over the river   
the rocks crumble over the hills
the rapids rush over the rocks like a ragging bull .                                      
                           
                                           

5 comments:

Athena said...

I can just imagine the trout

Mahana Kotuku said...
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Mahana Kotuku said...

REMEMBER CAPITAL LETTERS AT THE START OF SENTENCES etc, the needs a capital T
'Ella

Mahana Kotuku said...

Man your work is all wonky, try to not use the SPACE BAR to much! ( :
Meg

Nettie said...

I do like the imagery, and I agree about putting capital letters in. Good effort Nettie