She is like a volleyball. She's soft hearted and warm. Although she look's unable she's out and about all the time. Her face is like tidal waves falling to the floor. Her hair is like a silver fire. Her eyelashes are see through and her eyes are blue.
I love my grandma.
By Orion
4 comments:
Ha me I like it it really represent,s our grandma
What do you mean she's like a volley ball?
It is interesting and fun nice job=~]
Well done Orion! it follows the success criteria really well ( at least 1 conjunction, at least 4 physical characteristics, 2 similes and no two sentences start the same.
I get the volley ball cause you explained it (soft hearted & warm). I think you should write this onto something nice and give it to grandma for Mothers Day. It is your grandma and she would love it well done you!
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