Kia ora. We are a bunch of Year 6, 7 and 8 kids at Mahana School, and we're looking forward to sharing our work on this blog. Please leave us some comments!
Friday, December 14, 2012
The water hole
The crystal water glimmered in the sun. I dashed over to the water hole. My legs still aching from the bike ride. My toes touched the chilly water. After I stood there glaring at the clear water for a while. Then Lucy calls me to come in. I took one step forward. A shiver rushes up my body. I trudged over to the other side, my legs turning numb. I clamber up the slippery rocks.
As I stood there I thought to myself, "Should I jump in or not?"
Then Lucy jumped in making a big SPLASH! One after another the class jumped off the rocks.
1, 2, 3...I jump off into the clear water. The water makes my body panic and I quickly shoot up to the surface. My head pops out of the water and I feel like an athlete that has just finished a swimming goal.
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