Kia ora. We are a bunch of Year 6, 7 and 8 kids at Mahana School, and we're looking forward to sharing our work on this blog. Please leave us some comments!
Wednesday, April 16, 2014
The Great War
The stench of decaying soilders lie before me in the grave of a hole. I see our trench it almost looks peaceful like I'm the only one in the world. An automatic killing machine breaks the horrible silence I duck as the bullets fly over my head. The killing machines plowing down the scared, panicking men left, right and center. My body clinches up I beg to myself not look up should I get court or should I just run. the mud seeps through my clothes as the sun falls from the sky as death catches up.
Life/war
Blue sky's - Black and smoggy
The smell of flowers - The smell of death
Children playing and laughing - corpses lying in the mud
Green pastures and brightly colored buildings - Fire and destruction
Birds flying trees swaying - Rats scuttling and destroying
Warm and comfy beds - Cold wet and no sleep
Clean fresh air - Gas and choking
WHY IS WAR LIKE THIS!
Anzac Writing Competition
The bullets gain speed as they shoot towards my chest. Dropping onto my knees, I whine and groan and fall into a small shell hole, I know the battle is still on so I stay still showing no sign of motion or noise but I can't help it, "I NEED HELP!" I shout but it is useless, I don't go, I stay, I look down at the blood oozing from my wounds.
If I go, I will get shot again. If I stay, I will suffer.
I imagine my friends, still out there, dropping like bowling pins, I still hear gun shots ringing in my ears, I gag smelling my blood mixing with the thick, brown mud underneath me. I feel as white as a ghost, I can't go on....
Will I die?
If I go, I will get shot again. If I stay, I will suffer.
I imagine my friends, still out there, dropping like bowling pins, I still hear gun shots ringing in my ears, I gag smelling my blood mixing with the thick, brown mud underneath me. I feel as white as a ghost, I can't go on....
Will I die?
Sunday, April 13, 2014
Thursday, April 10, 2014
2MUCH4U
2MUCH4U
Vince Ford
The car gradually picked up momentum. It left the drive and rolled down the grassy slope, picking up speed as it headed for the river at the bottom. "Awwww no," I groaned, but I hadn't seen the incinerator.
2MUCH4U is a fun and quirky story about Davin who is a normal boy who made a couple of (very stupid) mistakes and is trying to make them right. This book includes wild dogs, frisky stallions and a WHOLE load of trouble.
Vince Ford is a fantastic writer and he really understands kids literature, he is a kiwi writer and shows it in his writing. He has written other books such as Jonty and Choc, Tribal Ash and Dog on Trial.
We would recommend it to 10 year olds up (this book contains some naughty words.) We rated this book 4 out of 5 stars.
Overall its a fabulous funny book.
By Lottie, Lucy, Sapphira
Collaborative Art
Last week Mrs Denley came in to Kotuku to do some collaborative art with us. We were divided into 3 groups. Then we were each given a long piece of cardboard and a thin strip of paper that had been cut from a beautiful local photograph. Our task was to resize our little piece of the artwork onto the card, which would then be combined with the 'strips' of other kids in our group. We were able to use any medium we liked. We had no clue what the finished product was meant to look like. Here are some photos of the work in progress.
Finished products will be coming soon. Watch this space...
Friday, April 4, 2014
The Lego Car.
Today for discovery I made a car with tones of gears. It's front
wheels turn a gear on the axle that turns a tiny gear that turns
another gear that turns another gear that turns another gear that turns the wheel on the axle. The two back wheels turn another gear that turns another gear then just stops (I added it in for fun with spare gears.). If you want to see a video of the car just copy
file:///Users/students/Desktop/MVI_4849.AVI
and paste it in the google bar. Hope you like my discovery!
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