tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2371606962689315741.post1221778614885132713..comments2024-01-24T23:38:37.573+13:00Comments on Mahana Kōtuku Blog: Animals deserve to be freeJustin Nealhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17888929744653052884noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2371606962689315741.post-68174113367671290702014-07-03T18:05:18.564+12:002014-07-03T18:05:18.564+12:00Hey Meila, some relevant points here. Read through...Hey Meila, some relevant points here. Read through it again with the eyes of a 'reader'. There are some words missing. Also, please get back to me about the two reasons that we use apostrophes. Have you used them correctly in this piece? Have you put in all the punctuation you need (like question marks at the end of rhetorical questions)? Mahana Kotukuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00824797729741684472noreply@blogger.com